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Thursday, 6 July 2017

Where in the world is Mrs May.

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Where in the world is Mrs May?
Write a creative story about where you imagine Mrs May to be today? Remember to use lots of details and descriptions! I can’t wait to read your stories.
Mrs May  and I are in the Mr willy wonka's Factory. Mrs May and I are stuffing all the rainbow gobstopper in our pockets. The big purple lollipop is the size of our head. When we see the Oompa-loompas we scream. I can see Mrs May running like a mad pig. The Oompa-loompas are saying “That is a crazy  women. Yea I Know I replied. We went on the pink lolly seahorse. Mrs May is putting her head in the chocolate river. I tell her that she is gorging herself. I tried to get you but we both fell in. We got swirled around and around then the pip came we got sucked up the pip we swirl and swirl to we went up the glass pip into the bubble gum room. When we got there we started to it throw the bubble gum and then we were covered with bubble gum and creamy chocolate. We said together in a loud voices WE ARE NEVER GOING TO THE CHOCOLATE FACTORY AGAIN.  By Grace Ellen Bradfield.

House on fire

House on fire

I hear the alarm going . I quickly say FIRE! FIRE! Mum gets low and goes and helps Sadie and Billie. I see the fire licking the roof. I hear Lola crying. I get on my hands and knees and get low, get down, get out. I am shaking like we just had an earthquake. When we are out at the mailbox I see the house on hot, angry, ferocious fire. I shout at Mum and say CALL 111 NOW. While  Mum was on the phone. I  count all my sisters, Sadie, Billie,  Lola, Eve and Me I say, but Dad is not here. When the fire truck comes.I say “Dad is not here. “They quickly get him out. He is coughing so hard he has to go to the hospital . After 6 weeks he went home. We got a new home and  never want that to happen again.By Grace Bradfield